All additions will need to be added in text form to your script NOT in a podcast
P1: learners will give a factual description of a writer’s role within the commissioning process, typically of the hierarchical structures and the process of script development. All aspects of the description will be substantially covered, accurate and relevant. Evidence will show a basic understanding of technical terminology but learners will generally be unsure about this vocabulary and will make fairly frequent mistakes when they do use it.
M1: learners will explain a writer’s role in the commissioning process providing examples, from existing media products or companies and talking about this process in such a way as to show why things are the way they are. Relevant examples will be given to support what is said, but learners will not elucidate these examples to show how they illustrate the point they support. Generally, their response will demonstrate a good understanding of the wider context within which a writer works and the responsibilities that this role entails. Learners will use technical vocabulary for the most part correctly, but may make mistakes or be unsure about
usages at times.
D1: learners will discuss the writer’s role in the commissioning process in detail, with reference to the positive or negative aspects of this position and elucidating upon the examples they give. Fuller and more extensive explanation, better application of examples, and provision of argument to support points made, plus the higher quality expression, will discriminate between this grade and the merit. Technical vocabulary will be secure and used correctly and confidently at all times.
Joe Vaughan D1
Good sense of the job, herarchy and the process of hierachy and having to work up
bbc commissioning process is given as example; clear sense of hieracy and structure in bbc and itv good sense of repsonsibility and role entails, good pros and cons
arran, bilal and josh M1
Good sense of the job, hierarchy and the process of hierarchy and having to work up clear sense of hierarchy and structure in bbc and itv good sense of responsibility and role entails, good pros and cons
all of you need to explain the commissioning process in detail (for itv and bbc)
Ben Garbutt (M1)
Good sense of the job, herarchy and the process of hierachy and having to work up clear sense of hieracy and structure in bbc and itv good sense of repsonsibility and role entails, good pros and cons
MORE on commissioning process needed.
BETH BURNS M1 ( a bit more on commissioning needed)
Great research on role and repsonsibilities and pros anc cons, good sense of the hierachy and working in the role
Charlotte Makin D1
Great research and use of industry clips, excelletn understanding of the role of the writer in the commissioing process and what they need to do to ensure success. good examples of commissioingin theough agent and optioning
Connor Milligan (m1)
Good idea of role and repsonsibilities and some of the sense of the herachy involved
you need to explain in your own words about how a writer can get an idea commissioning, so you need to explain what actually happens and how you send something in to ITV and BBC
More needed on the pros and cons of being a writer
ELLIOT DUGDALE Now a MERIT
you need to explain how the commissioining process works for itv and bbc in more detail
EMMAN SHEMA D1
Freddie Poole M1
Good idea of role and repsonsibilities and some of the sense of the herachy involved
you need to explain in your own words about how a writer can get an idea commissioning, so you need to explain what actually happens and how you send something in to ITV and BBC
More needed on the pros and cons of being a writer
HARRY KING NO SUBMISSION IN TIME FOR DEADLINE YOU WILL HAVE TO DO A ADDITIONAL UNIT TO COMPLETE THE COURSE
fail
incomplete submission
JADE MAHER D1
JAMIE D1
Good sense of the job, herarchy and the process of hierachy and having to work up
bbc commissioning process is given as example; clear sense of hieracy and structure in bbc and itv good sense of repsonsibility and role entails, good pros and cons
JOSH PATERSON M1
Good idea of role and repsonsibilities and some of the sense of the herachy involved
you need to explain in your own words about how a writer can get an idea commissioning, so you need to explain what actually happens and how you send something in to ITV and BBC
Katie Marsh D1
Leah Carter m1
Good idea of role and repsonsibilities and some of the sense of the herachy involved
you need to explain in your own words about how a writer can get an idea commissioning, so you need to explain what actually happens and how you send something in to ITV and BBC
MAT LEATHERBARROW
Pass
could not see a podcast so I marked your script
you need to explain how the commissioning process works for bbc in more detail
you need specific examples of legal action
you need to end with the pros and cons of being a writer
Matt Benn D1
Good sense of the job, herarchy and the process of hierachy and having to work up
bbc commissioning process is given as example; clear sense of hieracy and structure in bbc and itv good sense of repsonsibility and role entails, good pros and cons
MATT KING
D1
Maddi Mullins M1
Good idea of role and repsonsibilities and some of the sense of the herachy involved
you need to explain in your own words about how a writer can get an idea commissioning, so you need to explain what actually happens and how you send something in to ITV and BBC
More needed on the pros and cons of being a writer
Jess Pitman D1
Good sense of the job, herarchy and the process of hierachy and having to work up
bbc commissioning process is given as example; clear sense of hieracy and structure in bbc and itv good sense of repsonsibility and role entails, good pros and cons
Vicky Howarth (m1)
Good idea of role and repsonsibilities and some of the sense of the herachy involved
you need to explain in your own words about how a writer can get an idea commissioning, so you need to explain what actually happens and how you send something in to ITV and BBC
ALEX MOORE
PASS
you need to explain how the commissioining process works for itv and bbc in more detail, how do you send it in, what feedback do you get?
you need to explain how you 'as a writer' get your script made, some moreresearch about 'optioning' is needed, use the links more and give some advice about writing the script that gets commissioned
Alex Davison M1
Good idea of role and repsonsibilities and some of the sense of the herachy involved
you need to explain in your own words about how a writer can get an idea commissioning, so you need to explain what actually happens and how you send something in to ITV and BBC
Callum Morris
Pass
Good sense of pros and cons of writer and good sense of hierarchy in the job
commissioning process is described in terms of what happens to the writer and the channels process, as well as the relationship between the two
you need to disucss ‘optioning’ plgerism and libel, court cases and pros and cons as a finish
Ria Ebert M1
Good idea of role and repsonsibilities and some of the sense of the herachy involved
you need to explain in your own words about how a writer can get an idea commissioning, so you need to explain what actually happens and how you send something in to ITV and BBC
Ryan Childs NOW MERIT
PASS
could not see a podcast so I marked your script
you need to explain how the commissioining process works for itv and bbc IN MORE DETAIL
MORE with the pros and cons of being a writer
Sam m1
good quotes; good sense of role and responsibility (staff writer and the writing process)
bbc commissioning process expplained and a sense of the writers role in the process and the relationship between the bbc and writer, optioning and sense of hierachy disucssed
more needed on pros and cons
Will Wray Lang
D1
Good sense of the job, herarchy and the process of hierachy and having to work up
bbc commissioning process is given as example; clear sense of hieracy and structure in bbc and itv good sense of repsonsibility and role entails, good pros and cons
Will Holland M1
good sense of role; good sense of hierachy and repsonsibility
more needed on commissioining proicess, how it works and what the writer has to do, be specific about how the bbc or itv give feedback to writers
Alex Woods Marc Woods (D1)
Good sense of the job, herarchy and the process of hierachy and having to work up
bbc commissioning process is given as example; clear sense of hieracy and structure in bbc and itv good sense of repsonsibility and role entails, good pros and cons
Callum Booth
Pass
could not see a podcast so I marked your script
you need to explain how the commissioining process works for itv and bbc in more detail
you need to explain how you 'as a writer' get your script made, some research about 'optioning' is needed, use the links more
you need specific examples of legal action
you need to end with the pros and cons of being a writer
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